Response to Roughcut Feedback

Overall we seem to have recieved positive feedback with useful criticism such as:

• Including more varied shots/camera angles
• Adding more footage (already aware of)
  

Most of the feedback picked up on the fact that in our video Rob lip syncs to the words 'Stop complaining' which are sung by a female artist. We want to emphasise that although Rob is the aritst he is also portrayed as being a geeky character who is singing along to the song. We realise that this looks a bit odd at the moment but once we have put more lip syncing showing Rob rapping aswel, it will hopefully look more effective and become clearer that he is meant to be singing along to the song rather than performing it.