Feedback on our Pitch

Positive Feedback
Our audience found are pitch to be clear and understood how we want are music video to be comprised. Our teacher stated that overall the pitch was presented up to standard and liked the fact we discussed what we might need to consider when filming.
Another point was that the way we discussed how Goodwin's points were to link with are film, they found came across well.
Overall they understood most of are pitch.

Negative Feedback
The understanding of how were exactly were going to compose are DVD cover and music video was not present well and was quite confusing to the audience, thought they new how we wanted to use colour etc. We just didn't inform the audience well enough.

Improvements from Feedback
After getting our feedback I have tried to change are DVD /Magazine cover post so it is more easier to understand. Also I have expanded on the post explaining how else we might create them.