Feedback from T2-44

Effectiveness of Storyboard

The storyboard clearly shows an overview of the idea of the music video. It shows the camera angles and shots that you will use in a clear way so that an outsider can understand. Also the storyboard matches the idea of the shot list and the time line into how your storyboard is similar to your beginning idea. The images clearly illustrate the shots and angles so that we can see the particular parts of the video without needing visualise the shot list.

Portrayal of the artist

Your storyboard has portrayed your main character of being a geek, referring to your previous mise-en-scene. The glasses and posh short hair defines this well.